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It looks exactly this bad...
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Never trust a fucking Martian...
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There's an elf in the corner!
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Listen, I wanna segue this scene to focus on the narrator.
I'm picturing him as a sort of film noir fellow in a smoky bar.
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Curiously seated in the corner...
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Smoke dazzling the thick air...
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And then, She walked in...
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Enchantedly, her figure stood unmatched...
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All eyes drew upon her...
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You could hear ashes drop...
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She held the room captive...
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It was, it was Destiny...
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"Hey fellas, I'm Detective Delicato."
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(It's a lady detective. Also in film noir style.)
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"This blonde broad's a detective!?"
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"I'm looking for the Martian."
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"There ain't no Martians here!"
